DISCLAIMER: I do not own this setting. i do, however, own all the characters, and thier outfists. Please do not steal them, it took me forever to think of it.
This is basically a story i'm writing abouta girls tavels. it should be rather boring at the moment.

Bree awoke, and looked around her. Her wavy red hair flowed behind her, as she got out of bed. Her gray eyes twinkled, ever so slightly. She stood up, and held onto the tree for grip. The sun was shining, the small and feeble branches were nothing, they were only able to hold back the light so she wouldn't be blinded. She was still in the clothes she wore the day before, the black shirt that only went down to her elbow, and didn't cover her shoulders. Her same black pants, and her boots. They were rough and tough, they had been through every battle, and were flexible enoughe so she sould bend her foot. "Good morning." She said to her very dark brown hors, Guinivere. She walked over to a stream, where she undressed her clothes, and started to bathe. When she was done she called for her horse, who brought her her cloak. She got out, and put it on. She set her clothes by the fire, to dry. "Why can't i stay. Well, i know why. and thats that." She talked to herself. She looked at her hip, where her sword was, and was the only thing besides Guinivere that didn't leave her side. She heard the cracking of a twig, and immediately thanked the Higher for stage 5. She stood up, and there was a man. "How long ahve you been there?" She demanded, her smile went away, and her dimples went with it.
"Long enough to know that you are very beautiful. Wasn't the water cold?" He asked. Bree pulled her cloak tighter around her.
"Go, now. Youre not wanted in these woods." She motioned for him to leave, but quickly pulled her arm back. Despite her anger, she couldn't help but smile. He was dressed in a tanish green, long sleeve shirt, a forest green vest, with no seams, not buttons up the front, and the same colored tan green pants, which were very tight. His shoes were merely brown sacks tied at the ankles with small rope. His curly brown hair gave an impression of a young boy. She could tell he was elven, like herself.

sounds interesting. i like the consistent use of description of not only the characters, but the setting as well. i'm looking forward to the next installment.

"I saw you in town." He said, making no regard to her notion to leave. "You don't have a place to stay, do you?"
"Well, excuse me, but my dwelling is none of your business." She walked away, only to return fully clothed.
"Well, how do you get food?" He poked whatever he was cooking. It smelled of rabbit, and vegatables. Almost like the town he was referring to, and the one she just came from. "Do you want some?" He asked, not turning his purple like eyes toward her.
"No. i just ate." She sat beside him, she couldn't shake the feeling of comdort from him She wasn't used to having company, and she liked.
'i can't have company' she thought. 'but, why? just because i havn't before doesn't mean anything. you don't know how.' she argued back. THe whole time this went on, the new man was staring intently. 'there is a first time for everything.' she finalized. By now, the sun was high, and the trees let in every drop of light. THe forest smelled like new rain. Birds could now be heard. Bee stood up. "My name is Bree Vaught. Nice to meet you." She started over.
He stood up as well. "Nice to meet you, my lady." He kissed her hand, and she was surprised how soft his worked to the bone skin was. "My name is Ickeris." He smiled, and, not surprisingly, his teeth were perfect too.

Add a disclaimer before you continue. Even if it isn't Harry Potter it is fan fiction. And you don't own the names of the places or anything.

Thank you

^-^very interesting..ickeris, huh? that's cool too.....

OOC: great, huh, biznotch! lol!
BIC: Bree blushed, and then smiled. She was suddenly becoming so feminine, and she realized it. This was one thing she didn't like. She let her guard down, not again. She smiled, though. She hummed, and sat down. He got some bowls out of bags, from heaven knows where off into the green and damp forest. He poured some soup in to the two bowls. "I said i wasn't hungry." Bree said almost confused., her knees up to her chest.
"You were just saying that, because you didn't like me. But now, i can tell youre infatuated with me." He said, not bragging at all.
"Well, i don't know who you are to tell me what i am!" Bree jumped up, offended.
"But, my lady it is true. And i am quite infatuated with you. more than you with me." He words were that of honesty, and bree sat back down.
"No infatuations. I just had an arguement with myself about company." She twisted her hair, and ate the delicious soup.

Very good Snape! ...please post more

And its good that you posted a disclaimer... (thanks hermione9001)

Ooh, ooh, ooh! What's gonna happen? Please write more, HTH!

COMPLETE WRITERS BLOCK!!! i guess this is the part where they just chat, and i hate those parts. I have to have something exctiting, but i don't want to bring in my new character.... AAAAAH!

ohh ...thats a pity your story is good! -a new character -sounds interesting

She sits silently for some time, nad goes into her shelter, leaving ehr guest alone. She falls asleep, thinking hard. She wakes up to find him standing over her, smiling.

... waiting for more

That is really really good! Please write more! Sorry you have hit writers block (been there, done that) I hope you find more to write about!

I would give you some suggestions to help ya out, but I am kind of blank minded too... Maybe you could have orks attacking them or chasing them or somthing I have no idea... but Keep typing it is really good!